Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Unsolicited (and unwanted) excerpt from my developing novella of Lobot fanfiction

Preface: i decided to make a backstory about Lobot.
he's a Clone War veteran that got the back of his head blown off and ends up on Cloud City since it's where people go when no one wants them anymore.
Lobot was a hero, but here's the scenario for why/how he would up being a cyborg controlled by Lando's samsung wristwatch:





Light-minutes out from the clonemaster shipyard and the assault commandoes preparing to wreak havoc on the clonemaster defenders, the main force of the Republic assault fleet lurked in the magnetic shadow cast by the supermassive primary star of the system.


“Admiral, priority alert from the comm frigate!”
“Put them on,” Shrr Haalasi ordered, staring out the viewport at the approaching field of battle bathed in the blood-red output of the star.
The squeak-crackle of feedback from a narrow beam transmission filled the speakers in the admiral’s command chair and earpiece before the channel cleared itself, and the panicked voice of the communications officer filled the bridge.
“-peat: Overrode jamming frequencies of clonemaster intelligence bureau, I need to speak with the admiral immediately, we have to abort the mission!”
“You have him, son. What is the cause for alarm?”
“Sir! Admiral. Sir,” the officer stammered as he regained his composure, and an icy calm flooded his speech. “We’ve broken through the comm jamming and decrypted the frequencies the clonemasters have been using in this sector, we have to abort the mission. We have confirmed deployment of a berserker-class division for this garrison. The entire deployment is crewed with berserkers.”
Haalasi froze in his chair for a fraction of a second, his hearts fluttering, and he barely fought off the instinctive reaction to unsheathe his claws in defense. Only the most seasoned officer in his fleet would have noticed the temporary loss of control, and would have been terrified of his reaction.
“Repeat that again, soldier. And make damn sure you have confirmation in triplicate.”
The voice over the comm made an audible swallowing sound, trying to muscle down his own fear. “It’s confirmed, admiral. I decoded the algorithms myself, and our entire pool of cryptography droids nearly blew out their motivators alerting us. We have to order the retreat immediately.”
Haalasi glanced over at his executive officer, and could see the sorrow pulling at every muscle of her face. The most miniscule shake of her head spelled out the fate of his assault fleet if they sounded a general retreat. The clonemaster interdictors would pluck every individual cruiser out of hyperspace and blast them into slag, and that was only if they managed the full-reverse thrust out of the gravity well of this near-supernova gigantic star. The attack was specifically plotted to carve through the clonemaster defensive lines and straight on to the hidden shipyards whose destruction were the key objective of the mission. Kaalasi was handpicked to oversee the attack, and the only possible retreat was predicated on breaking through the defenses of the shipyards, to carry the fleet out of the gravity well.
The fleet was assured victory under the admiral, even a pyrrhic victory would have been seen as a success since the loss of these shipyards would end the ability of the clonemasters to launch their suicide attacks on the inner core.
But not against berserker clones. It couldn’t be done.
Even before the wars broke out, it was long established that a clone could be grown only so fast, less they risk a crop suffering from Force Madness. The jedi insisted it was against the natural order of the living Force to grow a sentient biological organism too quickly; the result being a thinking, freely acting individual abandoned by the Force to an existence outside of that which filled the entire galaxy. That exclusion, the sense of absolute solitude and abandonment by the energy that bound everything together led to a level of insanity that was unmatched.
The clonemasters saw the raw power in that aberrance, and seized upon the potential inherent in the intrinsic detachment of all that was.
Berserker clones were the result of that experimentation and were deployed midway through the war. The results were polarizing.
Uncommitted systems rapidly pledged support to the Republic after the carnage of berserker attacks on systems was revealed; and on the opposite end of the spectrum, even more systems pledged allegiance to the clonemaster union if only to avoid the deployment of that terrible weapon anywhere near their sector.
A berserker emerged from the special decanting process with nothing but the rapid subliminal education the clonemasters gave to all of their crops, but specially modified to control this line with the most barely controlled infinite pool of rage. Severed permanently from the connection that unified the rest of the galaxy, a berserker was a universe unto itself. They knew no fear, no pain, no happiness, no love, the only source of satisfaction was in the destruction that the force-attuned beings had tried to build.
Jedi felt their influence dampened, if not outright quashed while encountering them. A fully committed berserker could shrug off anything but the deepest influence by the force, wielded by only the most powerful Jedi in the Order. Journeymen, Apprentices, Knights, even Masters had been slain by the elite berserker clones, armed and armored in the most arcane of armor and weapons.
An entire division of berserkers, one hundred thousand warriors specifically bred to bring about the downfall of civilization, faced the assault fleet. Reflexes faster that any species in his command, intelligence unmatched by only the elite of the command corps, savagery unknown since the long-past Sith War. Haalasi had only one choice to make.
“Mother,” he whispered to ears he hoped were only his own while surreptitiously fingering the talisman carried by most of his Trianii people, “I hope not to see you this day, but if I do let it be with a welcoming embrace in the fields of After the End.”
Haalasi steadied himself, and cast a shrewd eye on the holograph of friendly and enemy ships preparing for engagement. “Break silent running,” he barked to his command staff. “Let our commandoes know what they’re going to be up against when they break through. The more spread out the crew of those ships the better, and reload  Yx-Wingbombers with proton bomb charges, we have no plans to take on captives or surrendered survivors. What we’re going up against do not plan on being any.”
He watched the scurry of controlled chaotic activity ramp up on the bridge, and almost as an afterthought gestured to his own communications officer to open a channel.
“Wide broadcast, if you please, ensign. We need to let everyone know just what we’re heading into.”
The young ensign donned a set of earphones and dialed in a basic frequency, and flashed a double-thumbs up.
Over the signal of an open, unsecure channel, Haalasi cleared his throat, rubbing the smooth fur that covered his larynx. “Berserker clones fall like any other target of a blaster, one flesh burns like the rest. Today they fall just like any other man. All weapons are free.”
Haalasi gestured for the closure of the channel, and cast a slightly smug smirk at his first officer. She shook her head and sighed, a small moment of humor before the destruction began. Haalasi stood up from his chair and smiled. If this was the end, the would greet it with open arms.
“When in maximum range, turbolasers open fire.” He said, feeling the pull of the flagship as it accelerated into hell.